Ron's Spiders by: Alyssa

Note: the reviews marked with asterisks (*) were reviewed by members of fanfiction.net, taken from that site and posted here.

*~The idea was excellent- the point of view switch in the beginning should probably be shifted out, and the plot got a bit confusing, but the general idea of the story was amazing. I really loved the line about Ron's spiders. Good job. -zorro x

*~ Hi, thanks for reviewing my story!
cool story, hope you'll write more! -phred doesn't like you

*~ Now that was deep, though I'm a bit confused... Was Ginny there? The death Eater,maybe? I'm tired and slow so be nice, lol nice poem... -Iko Baby

*~ This is interesting. Is Ginny the Death Eater? I'm a bit confused.
Oh well, this is still good. I think you have a great writing style. -ElfsRule

*~ That was really good. A little confusing though when the death eater is talking in Ron's mind -Jessica Potter 5

*~ Wow! That was cool! I loved it! -LinkinParkWriter

*~ Hey, this is pretty good. There were even several lines that made me grin a little like, "No one realized that it was eating him alive. Like spiders." I always felt a little like Ron because I, although not younger in the family, am always doing something right behind somebody else. ...-Celebrindal

*~ That wuz an awesome story was it one shot or are you writing more?? I hope u write more it is really good! Thx for reviewing my fic it meant alot to me! -minimouse

*~ I LOVED it. The last paragraph relly tied everything together and made everything perfect, AMAZING! -SecretDestiny13

*~ Hey! This story was really nice. I always wonder how Ron feels, pushed to the back, always second best. But your story described just what I thought he'd feel!
Well Done! -Passionflower