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The Disease by: April
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*~ Hmm could be longer. Why doe she want her with Ginny? Why Ginny? Why not anyone else? Explain the disease more. Detail the life of the boy before he came to Hogwarts. Help us understand the way the boy lives now. What is the disease exactly? Is it rare? More details!
Hope this helps! :) Keep it up! -Amanda Lupin
*~ UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! -yaukira
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